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    Omnipotent Arts Chapter 6

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    Post by Destinykil Mon May 09, 2011 3:08 pm

    Omnipotent Arts Chapter 1
    Omnipotent Arts Chapter 2
    Omnipotent Arts Chapter 3
    Omnipotent Arts Chapter 4
    Omnipotent Arts Chapter 5


    Chapter VI: Consequences

    Q was playing the scenario over and over in his head. His underestimation led to Yoyo getting seriously injured. He knew his actions on Des were a little harsh but he deserved it. Q rose from his seat and made his way to the operating room where Yoyo's ribs were being repaired. Normally, time would heal such a wound but Q had access to secret medical techniques. Gen strode into the room and stood near Q. She placed her hand on her hip and giggled slightly.

    “What's so funny Gen?”

    “Well it seems Des has already started to recover. Something about him isn't natural. It's intriguing to say the least.”

    “Well maybe he needs to be taught a lesson in pain. Bring me our Hapkido master, Mikel..”

    Gen saluted Q and took off quickly to fetch Mikel. Q moved past one of the surgical staff members and stared at Yoyo. The sight of her lying there, being operated on was almost to much to bare. He moved back and leaned against the wall. Q started to hear footsteps inching closer to the door he stood next to. The door slid open and in stepped Gen smiling and behind her strode in a man. He was quite tall and relatively toned. His slick black hair was spiked up and his clothes were made of the finest silk. His name was Mikel. He never really showcased his art around the others, he was more mysterious than anyone else.

    “Thank you Gen. Your job is done here, begone, I must speak to Mikel alone.”

    Gen saluted and took off out the door whistling until her whistle became a distant noise in the backround. Q shot a look at Mikel and he nodded and stepped closer.

    “Mikel. As you witnessed, Des is a strong force. One who knows no boundaries. I would like you to put him in his place. Do it fast..”

    “Q...it shall be done.”

    Mikel bowed slightly and exited the operating room. Q placed his hand on his chin and stared hard at Yoyo. He sneered and exited the room and bolted for Des' room. The door flew open and crashed into the wall. Des looked over at Q who grabbed him by the throat.

    “You up now! Let's go.”

    Des tried to resist but Q was too strong in his weakened state. Q dragged him through the halls until they emerged into the arena. Des saw one man standing in the center of the arena. Q tossed him into the arena and Des hit the ground with a thud. He coughed heavily and grabbed his ribs. Des slowly rose to his feet and faced Mikel.

    “You, me, fight now. There is no excuse to deny.”

    Before Des got a chance to speak, Mikel flew forward and drove his palm into the throat of Des. He flew back grasping his throat gasping for air. Mikel stared at him with a malicious look in his eye. Des began to rose but was interrupted by a kick to his ribs. Mikel was fast and unpredictable. He lifted Des to his feet and took a few steps back. Des rushed forward wincing in pain and threw a low kick to Mikel's inside thigh. He laughed and stepped back causing the momentum of Des' kick to spin him around. Des turned his head around to see the hands of Mikel wrap around his body and grip him tight.

    “Feel the pain you caused Yoyo..”

    Mikel gripped the armpit of Des with one hand and the pants with his other and flipped Des in the air. He spun around and threw his foot up catching Des in the abdomen. Des gagged and hit the floor heavily. Q watched the fight intensely. Each hit that made contact with Des pleased him. Normally this wasn't what he liked to see but the pain of his close friend drove him into a rage. Mikel continued to pummel Des left and right before a loud shout halted the assualt.

    “STOOPPPP! He's had enough.”

    Q looked over to see Gen run into the arena and push Mikel away. Mikel's emotions grew blank and he stepped back from the beaten man. Gen looked over at Q and her eyes were burning. Q stood up and halted the fight. He looked at Mikel and nodded slightly. Mikel nodded back and exited the arena hastily. Des lied there on the arena ground beaten and bruised like never before. His pride was diminished and his ego deflated at the hands of Mikel, someone he knew nothing about. Gen leaned down next to Des and ran her fingers over his wounds. She was trying to fight the light in this situation and giggle but nothing came out but a slight sob.

    “What were you trying to accomplish Q? I knew he needed to be taught a lesson but not senselessly beaten. Are you happy now?...”

    Q walked up to Gen he shoved him away and ran out of the arena. He knelt down next to Des and moved closer to his ear.

    “Next time think before hurting your new friends or you will die here.”

    Des looked at him and smiled before giving off a little nod. Q snickered and summoned forth two medical personnel. They lifted Des onto a small cot and rushed towards the medical rooms. Q stood back up and looked at the arena floor. Spots of Des' blood gave the arena floor some pizazz. He sighed and exited the arena and made his way back towards Yoyo's room. Q hadn't noticed the time flew by. Almost 2 hours went by as he watched Mikel break down the prideful Thai fighter. He opened the door slowly and stepped in.

    Yoyo was lying in a bed with an oxygen mask attached. She was all patched up and now resting. She looked like a fallen angel lying there almost lifelessly. Q walked up to her bed and ran his finger down the side of her face. A small tear emitted from Q's eye but he quickly wiped it away. He moved back towards the door and turned the lights down before exiting the room.

    “Perhaps I should pay Des a visit? Or maybe Gen...”

    Just as he finished his sentence, Gen ran past him and bumped into him. Q let it slide as she burst into the room where Des was. He was full of bruises and gashes and blood was everywhere. The doctors told Gen he has some serious injuries and some bones were broken. She approached the battered Des and placed her hands on his chest. She could feel the bruising and fractured bones. It was too much to bare for her. She ran out of the room past Q again and disappeared down a hall. Q walked into the room and noticed what exactly had been done. If the recovery process isn't done exactly right, Des could be out of commission.

    “Attention doctors. Make sure he gets the best treatment we have. I need him back on his feet.”

    With that being said, Q left the room and began walking down the hall pondering what he should do next.


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    Post by quater Wed May 11, 2011 6:14 pm

    The writing style in this one wasn't as good as some of your other chapters, personally.

    But otherwise, good chapter. Mikel is quite a frightening one.
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    Post by Yoyo Wed May 11, 2011 10:04 pm

    ^ Agree on both counts. Once again, Mikel has emerged as an awesome character~
    Fallen angel? Really? xD
    Anywho, decent chapter. Glad to get more, though you can tell it's pretty rushed. (Not that you care about that kind of stuff. :P )

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